Reflective Friendship

The mirror once a friend
a daily visit quite the trend.

A look here a look there
to adjust and smooth and stare.

not out of vanity or conciete
just to insure that all was orederly an neat.

but friends no more are we
for i do not recognize the image that i see.

No more aburn hair or long eye lashes
no more eye brows or funny mustashes.
just an image that looks unfinished.

but as i gaze at my reflection
im a sexy bitch apon closer inspection.

smooth sleek and clean
rather handsom and keen!

i dont need my old friend any more it seems

i have new friends with familer faces
beautifull and unique all from dif places.

a poem by
Brian E Kirchman

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Permalink Reply by kat533 on April 20, 2008 at 12:42pm: O.K. This is way cool. I like it a lot. It captures how I felt about 3 months into my total hair loss episode. Great job Brian.; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Jeffrey...... Don't you wish your boyfriend was bald like me on April 21, 2008 at 11:37am: Thanks for sharing Brian.
This really hits home.
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Permalink Reply by Orbit on April 22, 2008 at 8:08am: "just an image that looks unfinished."

Brian, the best thing to complete your "skin canvas" is your great smile!

I really enjoyed your poem, are you a poet at heart and have you been writing for a long time?; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by kastababy on April 22, 2008 at 9:40am: I LOVE IT!!!!; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Char on April 24, 2008 at 9:54am: That was great, very nicely done!; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by im to sexy for my hair(AKA Brian) on May 7, 2008 at 3:20am: thanks all i was happy with it; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by tamgirl on May 8, 2008 at 7:31pm: Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! makes me laugh and smile; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Billie on May 9, 2008 at 9:57am: Very well done! At last those who know exactly how we feel!
Thanks for sharing!!!!; ▶ Reply to This